I just need to fix this paper

I posted it yesterday but the tutor didn’t write what I asked for. It is good but she is missing a lot of stuff. I asked her to watch this documentary and write about three songs from the documentary that connects to my life.. I told her that the documentary talks about civil rights and racial discrimination in some songs nd i faced them as a Muslim and I struggled with civil rights back in Iraq. She wrote a summary of the video when we don’t have to, and she never chose 3 topics . We need to speak in first person point of view.so plz work on this and try to complete as much s you can because it is due in 1 hour.


here is the link to the documentary.